Dinner on the Deck

Dinner on the Deck


A slow turgid morning. Pink streaks in the sky. I sit on the deck to write, the air clammy, just a hint of coolness.

I look over at the table and remember the fun we had last night at dinner, all the girls here and a boyfriend, too. Laughing, talking all at once. There were grilled kabobs and rice, a simple, tasty meal. The mosquitoes were getting full, too. So we talked about our puny little citronella candles and how we have to find more powerful stuff.

As darkness grew, lightening bugs flashed and I plugged in the little white lights around the pergola. It was too bright. People started swatting at their legs, talking about how they were being eaten alive. It was time to clean up and move on. This morning I look at the table and remember it all.

One thought on “Dinner on the Deck

  1. I was intrigued by your use of the word turgid and decided to pursue it. It ended up being the subject of my posting in today's The Penultimate Word (www.jedword.com.) I'd be curious as to what you intended by the use of the word. However, I had fun just speculating.

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